Week 1 - The boat ride by Brandon

It was a sunny and blazing hot day. Grandpa said that we should go fishing because it's nice on the water today and it's great to go because the fish will be swimming higher in the water to get the sun light. Alright i say as i get the fishing gear and rush to the boat, we live close to the water so we don't need to hook the boat up to the truck to drive down to the water. suddenly as i was rushing down to the boat a 18 wheela ran me over. I was rushed to the hospital i recovered in 7 months time. The end

By Brandon

Week 1 - The gun by Maclaren

I was running down the silent street, when suddenly boom, I hered a gunshot from across the road, I hered people running and screaming and I ran for my life with lots of other people, there were sirens and gun fire back at him.  I ran until my friends cafe and she took me home and I saw it all over the news which made me cry but I was happy my friend was beside me and we cried together for ages it felt like 5 hours.

Then I realised it was all just a dream

By Maclaren

Week 1 - Suddenly by Amber T

As I ran, my jet black hair escaped from my ponytail and flew into my face. Tears ran onto my hot cheeks and I knew I could never go back. Dad would just hurt me again and I was not going to deal with the pain anymore. I sprinted across the street, not being careful of my surroundings. I could hear a car tooting its horn and its wheels screeching. Suddenly I felt pain through my entire body and the cold ground against my face and I knew I had been hit...

By Amber

Week 1 - Cold by Ruby

Mark’s blonde hair flopped in front of his face. He was staring down at his feet as he walked, his hands buried deep in his pockets. He had goosebumps on his pale arms and legs. He shivered, he hated winter it was always so cold and dark, unlike summer where it's all warm and bright. He thought back to his summer holidays and how fun it was. He wished it was the summer holidays again. He was happily thinking about his holidays when suddenly he walked into an older girl. She looked about 20 or so, she had short pink hair, colourful blue eyes and a beautiful smile. Mark couldn’t help but smile back.

By Ruby

Week 1 - Cold heart, rain, tears...By Abby

The girl looked outside, the rain had not gone. She sat motionless, leaning on her window. Her long blonde hair soaking wet dripping on her pale body. Her bright violet eyes blazing in the dull atmosphere, the rain had created grey shadows surrounding her room, it also created silence that filled the house. Rain lightly touched her head through a small hole in her roof, it had been there awhile. The coldness isolated the young girl, with the rain reaching out, raindrops painted her skin a dim white. Coldness represented her heart, Rain had represented her tears. But suddenly, the noise eased, the rain had stopped. What does that mean...?\

By Abby

Week 1 - Mouse Trap by Harriett

As i opened the cupboard, to grab a piece of bread i suddenly heard a silent squeak. I looked through the cupboard but didn’t see anything i knew it was a mouse.I was hoping that it wasn’t a rat so then i was curious,then i had to tell mum. But i knew that she was going to buy a mouse trap so i really didn’t want to tell her but i had to so then i went to find mum then told her she said a MOUSE!!

EWWW!!! I hate mice.I have to get a mouse trap straight away so she ran and got her car keys and said mitre 10 mega here we come!

By Harriett

Week 1 - 5 sentence challenge

One day i was walking down rocks road. It was sunny. There was rocks falling down. And then suddenly a big rock came down and crushed me. everyone was sad.

By Ryan