Sunday, June 7, 2015

Alyssa - Muddy Spoonbills

Mud steps heavy brown running 
"Ssssh!" Hissed one of the white fluffy spoon bills. It was a crisp cold night and all the birds were a sleep. "Quick we need to get home we are totally busted tomorrow!" They started running clumsily through the darkness, Their heavy feet ploughing through the soft squishy brown mud, their steps clearly visible behind them. Once the got back to the forest they heard rustling through the ferns, then kiwi leaped out of the ferns. "Where have you been? I am on night patrol with 20 others looking for you, your in ALOT of trouble." 

By Alyssa

2 comments:

  1. Hi alyssa
    I really liked your fluffy spoon bills imagination
    Great job keep up the good work!!
    From Nikita broadgreen intermediate :)

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  2. great story Alyssa. Next time re-read your story before you send it in. by Madison curtis.

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