Thursday, March 19, 2015

Fynn - The old pub



It was going seven when the street lamps flickered to life’ and the pub doors opened. I was turning the last corner on the route to the pub. My old mate and me were meeting at the pub. We hadn’t seen each other in ages, when I got there the pub looked worn down. I just remembered why I hadn’t been here in ages. The pub employees went on strike and the pub closed. The owner never came back and all my mates went there separate ways. Brainstorm my mate and I could buy the pub and own it great.


By fynn

Fynn - The farm


In a green medow a horse trotted carefully around broken pipes. That horse found a pond with algea the horse got in the pond. It was a boiling day as the horse swam he noticed the farmer putting his food down. The horse went over to his freshly placed food and engulfed it. When he was finished with his food he went over to the medow with tall green grass and fell asleep. The horse woke up to the farmer stroking his short shiny white hair. The horse saw his dinner but decided to eat it later he was happy.


By fynn

Fynn - My safari


I looked out of the plane window and thought that the sight I was seeing was magnificent, I had never seen any thing like it. It was the start of my holiday and I was going to the islands I could not wait till I arrived there. It was my only time of the year that I got to kick back and relax. I was staying in (hope fully a fancy hotel with a big room). I just can’t wait until I get there I thought happy thoughts and looked out of the plane window and went to sleep.


By Fynn

Jet - Li - THE CREATURES


I was biking down this mountain and then I got loss in the forest didnt know what to do so I bike around  the forest then there was huge thing it was a bear.I bike as fast as I could and I just got away.Then as I turned the corner there were wolfs,bears,lions,rhinos and much more.Then there was this flame creature and monster I bike for my life but I got caught then I woke up in a hole.

By Jet-Li


Wednesday, March 18, 2015

Jazmyn - Man hunt


As they turned the corner, my heart pounds my hands tremble like no tomorrow they come running at me i try to run away but they are too fast, screaming sprinting as fast as i can.Running in circles running  everywhere around the field suddenly i spot a hiding place they will never find me here.Minutes pass is it safe i decide to come out of hiding, i must be the last one standing! oh no they spotted me i sprint like no tomorrow there is like 50 people chasing after me, the all coner me i'm in the middle oh no i try to run but i got caught…
                                        Jazmyn

Caitlin - The Unexpected.



As they turned the corner..
Gravel grey paths stretched out in front of them.
The landscape around them seemed like heaven on earth.
A scent of Tulips and roses lingered onto my tounge.
They wandered around the sanctuary repeatedly.
We found that a pleasant breeze was blowing and clouds were gathering in aimlessly.
An array of colour sprinkled onto the horizon.
You could see distinctive features of buildings and houses in the distance.
We walk to the end of the road with our heads hung high, astounded at the beauty.

By Caitlin

Blake - as I turned the corner

As they turned around the corner they saw a dog.  It was black and white. Then it started speaking to them and it said “may I have a bone or a dog biscuit please”.  As they heard that their mouths dropped open. Then the dog said “please can I have one I can’t wait all day I’m starving?”  So one of them went off to the butchers shop to get a bone.  He brought back a bone and a dog biscuit as well.  Then he dropped it in front of the dog.  Suddenly he ate it in one gulp.

They laughed and the Dog smiled too.

By Blake

Anna - Earthquake


As I turned the corner the scene of destruction was immense, buildings in ruins like big-foot had just strolled across them. Dust enveloped like a winter’s cloak, as the bitter taste of coal lingered on my tongue. The revolting smell of smoke filled my nostrils while the deafening silence frightened me; it was like all noise had been taken out of everybody. Cones and large gates had been placed attentively around houses badly damaged from the earthquake. People wandered aimlessly around the perimeter fence, stunned as they tried to make sense of it all. Disaster was etched on every face.

                                   By Anna 

Jordan - the birthday

It was Tim’s 13th birthday and he had invited 5 of his friends around to go paint balling. They started the long drive to the paint ball field and when they arrived a man told them to put the overalls on and explained how to play paint ball. The chosen game was called capture the flag. Once they had loaded the guns they started to play. Later in the game as Tim turned the corner he grabbed the flag and won them the game. When the game finished and when they were packed up and ready to go they got in the car with a couple of bruises but overall it was a good day for Tim and his friends.                                                                                                                                                                
By Jordan

Adam - Our bikes have gone!

Conner and his two friends had biked in to the city. It was the first morning of the holidays and they were going to the movies. They were excited to be seeing The Avengers becouse they liked Iron Man movies. They parked their bikes in the bike stand and locked them up, then slowly wandered around to the cinema. Conner went to buy the tickets and his friends brought three big buckets of popcorn.
After the movie Conner said," I liked the movie and I want to see the second one." They walked back to their bikes and as they tuned the corner they discovered their bikes were gone!! . . . .

By Adam