Monday, February 29, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 - Superheroes by Zoe

Superheroes
As we pulled up the drive into the silent backyard, I wondered what was in store for me inside. I had been told about James but meeting him was a whole different thing. I stepped inside the quiet house as I walked into the room I found myself gazing at this little boy ,with a smile bright enough to light up a room .  When I looked at  him ,his eyes lit up “can you help me walk again” he stammered?  He was all dressed up in a superman costume sitting on the couch, “of course I can” I said.
By Zoe

Week 5, Term 1 - Annora Blackwood by Abby

I coughed with rushing river water streaming down my throat, only thing that could save me now, was hope. Hope, that my hand would hold onto the tree branch. Pain crawled up my arm like a spider, gasping for air, more water surged into my mouth. My hand went numb, and let go of the rock. I spat with water hitting me in all directions as I drifted down the river. I spotted a waterfall ahead, I wail help although it’s pointless. Struggling for air, I fall. Then all of a sudden, I’m floating, a warm embrace holds me. I open my eyes. It was Annora Blackwood. My superhero.

By Abby

Week 5, Term 1 Super Allison by Amber

Once upon a time in a country far far away there was a girl called Allison. She had the power to fly and is bullet proff . One day there was massive shotting going on on the over the over side of world. So Allison flys across to the other side of the world. She goes into the shotting saving 10 people but than Allison gets thowen into a wall.By wonder man . Than Allison  flys up and kicks im in the face. Wonder man stops the shotting and everyone is safe again. Thanks to Allison  who now gets called Super Allison.

By Amber

Week 5, Term 1 - My Hero Sally by Michaela

My hero is amazing, she has blue hair that matches her eyes, she wears a pink bow over her blue hair. She wears a blue outfit with a pink star inside a pink circle. She has turquoise shoes and gloves she loves that colour. in her spare time she reads, draws, writes short stories for children, she enjoys helping out the community too she helps grow trees and does cooking for the elderly at the retirement home. She also works part time at a kindergarten where the small    children braid and decorate her hair with flowers. she’s great. her name is Sally.

By Michaela

Week 5, Term 1 - My Hero by Scarlett

Do you have a hero?, Well I do to.
My hero is tall and likes the colour blue.
She always wears a bun in her hair,
even if it’s messy she just doesn't care.
She won the wearable arts contest,
for me she is the best.
She taught me how to draw,paint and sketch
but I know just how to stretch.
She loves to sew her name is Sue
she sounds good to me how about you.
So as you can see she is my hero for me.
Nanny Sue. I  hope you get to meet her someday.

By Scarlett


























Sunday, February 28, 2016

Week 5 - Evie Newland by Ruby

The impact had sent me flying even though I was buckled in. I could hear my baby sister crying in her car seat, I didn’t know if she would die or not. Looking out my window I could see the blue water coming closer as if threatening me. I took a deep breath as we collided with the water. I struggled to breathe, the world around me was starting to fade, I felt arms wrap around me then everything went black. Her name was Evie Newland; she saved me that day; if it wasn't for her I might not be here. She is my real life superhero.

By Ruby


Thursday, February 25, 2016

The Green Dancer. - Sophia

There once was a time many years ago in a small village every sole was depressed and unmotivated. Until one day a circus came to town. This particular circus was a famous swedish circus called Green Dancer who traveled by boat.  They are looking for new recruits. There are seven hundred and thirty six people in town and the cercis only wants three people. On the fifth day the of the circus  visiting they performed a act involving swimming and it was extremely popular especially because they use a gas effect. The Green Dancer Circus ended up staying for thirteen days in total. And the town was happy because of their memory of the circus and three lucky people lied with the circus.

By Sophia

Fishing Disasters - By Zoe

Gemma and her father were setting fishing nets. When suddenly the wind picked up and without warning the still waters became white with froth and the boat rocked uncontrollably. A colossal wave crashed down onto the boat and sent Gemma into the choppy waters. Her life flashed before her eyes and she realised if she didn’t survive she would become a professional dancer. As the sun came up she started swimming slowly back to shore. She turned back to the wreckage but she knew she was likely to never see her father again. As her eyes adjusted Gemma looked up and saw the red and green lights of her town

By Zoe

My day - Lucy

Today I was planning to go to the swimming pool . I was going to watch the synchronised swimmers compete and afterwards I would go on the dive well. I was so excited to wear my new green swimming togs. I was halmost there, when I smelt some thing ghastly then I saw a big line of caution tape there was a policeman that came and told me to get inside because there was some gas spilt and some swimmer called Chloe Dancer had to get rushed to hospital because she couldn't breath and there was likely to be no school


From Lucy

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Lights camera action!! - Harriett

LIGHTS CAMERA ACTION!!!! Everybody places.Lee-ann Tip toed onto stage everybody clapped for the dancer.everybody thought she was wearing a swimming suit it was a very pale green colour.1 hour later when she was driving home she ran out of gas :0 She ran as fast ato the nearest gas station she was so annoyed then a car stops she could ped beside her the gentle masn was wearing a suit and said to lee-ann hop in the car darling i’ll take you home lee-ann hoped in the car and since then she was never found again.Likely she could be dead

By Harriett

5 Sentence Challenge - Olivia

There r some boat siting on  the sand.
All the boat r all a colour  like red and blue.
There are lots of house in the backround.
The boat are all fishing boat.
It a perrty blue sky in the picture.

Security camera 4 audio recording - Jake

security camera 4 audio recording
10:40 AM:plague labs
sir we fail
what
We were only able to kidnap a dancer and A swimmer
You idiot only two test subject
But but sir it was likely to dangerous to kidnap more
Excuses excuses that’s all you Idiots come up with
but sir
SHUT UP there's only one thing to deal with you IDIOTS
release the nerotoxic gas
yes sir
Wh WHAT
Hahaha you actually think we were going to let you go… you really are an idiot
What's wrong a bit green hahaha
AHHH you ….monsters ……
Make sure the test subjects don’t escape
Yes sir hahaha
And destroy that security camera don’t want the employes to leave hahahahaha
Film dies

By Jake

Boats - Tamara


The City - Brandon


The Dancer - Danny



It was July The 25th 2015 but it was scorching hot so the children were dying for a swim but the pool was green so swimming wasn’t likely. Liam -the 10 year old- was super excited to see the hip hop dancer perform the next day...

It was finally the night of the dance Liam was hyped and so was the rest of the audience there was a timer counting down on a giant 200” tv screen. There was a huge explosion as the dancer walked out onto the stage but they had underestimated the power of the fireworks, they could smell gas as flames took over the building...

By Danny

The robot - Matthew


5 sentence challenge - Ryan

There are a lost of houses on the hill
The water is very warm
The water is very blue
There are a few bridges
There are ten boat parks on the side
 By Ryan

Miss Ayla lee-tyson (The Dancer) - Charlotte

       
“ shhhh it’s starting”, the curtains pull open and the show begins, It’s a big crowd and i’m feeling a bit antsy. “I’m a dancer you see and in this production I am centre stage the whole time. I’m wearing a green swimming costume and a very wide tu-tu. I’m lost at a gas station and I’m very likely to die but as the smoke clears I turn into a beautiful dancer and flowers go everywhere… anyway that’s all I can tell you, you’ll have to watch the rest of the show to find out” “oh, stage time… so excited bye”

                        By Charlotte

The normal day - Caleb

It was a cold and damp morning. Cars are zooming by with green chemical gases come from the exhaust pipe. People are synchronised swimming. People are dancing for money with the cold air coming from there life. Its likely to rain as the the clouds are low to the ground.
Buses are in and out of the city as people are getting to there jobs. Planes are taking of with the grass blowing behind them as they take off. There traffic everywhere will people are trying to get to work. The sky is covered in clouds while it starts to rain.
Caleb Andrews

The dancer - Jasmine

Once there lived a girl who was very good at swimming but she did'nt like it. She liked dancing and wonted to be a ballerina but her mum and dad would'nt allow it.
Everytime she asked they would say no. Two years later and she still doing swimming. One day she went to do her training for swimming  but the pool was closed most likley because of a toxic green gas. She walked bake home. When she got home her parent had an Email. That said the poo lwill be closed forever. So she got to do dacning in the end 

By Jasmine

Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Another day in the office - Maclaren


Hi I am George, I work at a gas station it's  quite a interesting job we have a range of people who come into my gas station like singers, famous sports players and dancers.We once had a green land swimming team come in because there bus had run out of petrol and the bus driver couldn't understand why the bus was smoking out of the engine. I had a wee look under the engine hood to see what had happened and it was likely to be the fact that it had no petrol.That is just another day in the office for me.

By Maclaren

FAMOUS DANCER CAUGHT RED HANDED…Amber T

This weekend there was news all around saying that the famous dancer Lily Green had announced she was going on a holiday to California. Everyone was looking around for her. The other day we got a call from a lady saying when she was driving to get gas she spotted Lily Green swimming on the beach in Nelson! She thought at first it was likely to be her but as she got closer she knew it was certain. Lily Green is saying it wasn’t her but we have photos to prove it. Caught red handed Lily.

By Amber T

The fire - Sam Car

Julia and I always both wanted to grow up to be a famous dancer. So this one particular sunny Sunday morning, instead of going to our swimming lesson we went to sign up at the local dance academy. But, when we got there, three of the gas canisters that ran the heating had exploded and caught the academy on fire. The fire was so hot that the blue,green and black paint on the outside of the building was bubbling. Once mum finds out what happened today, it’s likely she will drive us to swimming lessons next week!!

From Sam Car

Dear Diary - Scarlett

 
Dear Diary I have just past my dance exam and on the way home there has been a massive gas spill. Now we are stuck in traffic so I thought to my self why don't I write in my dairy because It is likely that I will be here for hours.So far 3 hours have past and we have been told that we can drive on in 5 minutes. Yay I said allowed in the car.Then we get let through and we may drive through the green grass. then I said to mum we should go swimming to get some fresh air and she said yeah I think so.
By Scarlett

An adult child - Abby


I open my eyes, my vision goes blurry. I blink a few times before getting out of bed. I change my clothes, put on a green t-shirt, some baggy pants and my cream winter coat on. I step outside my house and begin walking down the street. I look around and see a dancer on the corner of the street by the gas station, most  likely he is busking, I would be doing the same thing if it weren’t for my ‘kiddie’ job. I continue walking down the street, I look over to the docks to see children swimming, probably showering since most kids my age are homeless.
By Abby

Monday, February 22, 2016

Off to the Pool! - Ryan B

“Why don’t we go swimming?” She suggested, “I think that’s a good idea” Mum replied. So they packed all their gear into the car. “Gosh, this grass is so green, how can it survive in heat like this?” She asked “Oh, it’s likely they have sprinklers that pop up from the ground” Mum answered. “Why are we pulling in here?”She inquired “I need to get some more gas for the car” Her mum explained. Not long after they got going again, they arrived at the pool, “This is so crowded!” She moaned “There’s a special performance on, a dancer” Mum replied.

By Ryan B

Back in time - Kynan

Once upon a time  back when the humans were first introduced. They used to go swimming in little puddles from when the rain came. Gas was nearly impossible to get back then there were no cars. The world was probably still flat back then. The leaves were green and even being a dancer was cool back then. You are probably thinking Kynan that is not very likely but you never know people may have been swimming in puddles and dancing like there life depended on it. So you have learnt a little bit of nothingness today so bye.

By Kynan

The Frog - Connor

One day there was a little green frog who liked going swimming. One time he went swimming he bumped into a big black spider “Hi” said the spider. The frog just stood there screaming and then the frog ran away. The next day he went for a walk then he ran into his friend the dancer. So they stopped and chatted for a while frog asked if he made it into the dancing finals. The dancer said “I am most likely going to make it in.” Just then a big gas cloud came floating along “yuck” said the frog.


By Connor

The day i thought i sow a bomb!!! - by Amber N

Hi my name is Isabella and i'm a professional dancer.  Today I went swimming at a local pool near where I train for dance. I'm a  very busy person because i'm also training to become a
professional swimmer. My swimming coach said if I keep up the training i will most likely be ready to compete in a championship. Anyway when I was swimming I saw some green gas rise from a person's bag I yelled bomb bomb thinking it was a bomb but actually it was just some persons science experiment Whops !!!

By Amber N

The boats - Vannary

There was a big wave coming through. The boatman stopped and saw some little waves from the distance, he thought we were close to shore, but it was likely he was daydreaming because I think he was pretty sleepy.
The water was pretty green so it smelt pretty bad.

The gas ran out really fast so the engineer had to come and fix it we saw some people swimming and we thought it was just disgusting.
While we had to wait a guy put on some music to cheer us up. He was a pretty weird dancer.

By Vannary

Sunday, February 21, 2016

The incident - Ruby


The green gas started to rise, it moved across the room like a dancer performing their routine. People around me were falling dropping like flies. A sudden weight began to pull me down; I tried with all my might to fight it. It felt like I was swimming against the tide, even though it was likely I would be washed away to sea. I felt my legs fall from underneath me causing me to crash to the floor. A figure walked towards me, I tried to focus on the figure standing before me but failed and let the darkness take over.  

By Ruby

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

The fire - Harriett


The artist - Rawiri



The firefighters of 2000 - Matthew




The magic firemen - Ava

It was 2005 ………
When I was a baby my mum and me were in a fire
A bad one.
My mum called the fairy firemen.
Just in time the train stoped in front of our house.
Mum was crying for help.
Just then mum saw something flying from the sky.
They were people it looked like they had backpacks that had wings like fairies.
Mum was happy and safe with me. The next day we went to
The minister of 2000. He said he was going to give the fairy firemen and us too
We were happy and safe.

From  Ava




The Flying firefighters (pedestrian) - Charlotte

“Hey look” I hear someone say as I head towards the nearest corner store. I tilt mhead up just enough so the sun doesn’t melt my eyes and i see all twelve firefighters heading towards the company state building. I take out my headphones and hear a deafening scream coming from above. I see the most beautiful lady i’ve ever seen in a building blazing with flames bigger than my house. being scooped up by the head fireman with her baby in her arms. The fireman brings them to safety and the fire is out,everyone claps and cheers “HOORAY”
By Charlotte

The fire - Maclaren

I woke up to, beep beep beep, and I thought that my baby had been fiddling with the microwave but once I completely woke up I realised that it was the smoke alarm, it was a fire so I called the the angel fire men. They have big wings and they have long hoses that come from the ground. They wore instantly here grabbing my baby and me that come from the ground and I live like 32 stories up, so when the fire men got here the man took us from our burning apartment to safety which was in the middle of the train station which was at peak time so everyone was there watching us,  “embarrassing”

By Maclaren

Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Prediction - Jasmine

Hi and welcome to the year 2000. You might think this is a bit strange,really high
houses and fire-fighters with back packs that had wings inside them.Yes you might
think it's weird but thats how the year 2000 is like. My name is Jeff and my great great grandma is the second oldest person in the world. Well second after my great great Grandad. Who sadly passed away. In my opinion he is the best predictor ever. This is what he predicted the fire fighter would have wings and the houses are high up. He also draw a picture and in the picture my mum was in a fire in her house, And last year my mum really was in a fire. So my great great Grandad is a good predictor even though he is died.

By Jasmine 

The firemen - Connor

Swooping soaring through the sky trying to save someone from a fire on their backs are
wings with hoses an axes in their hands with  rock hard helmets on their heads this is a job of a complicated fireman they fly around waiting for a status update they tackle things like fires house fires to forest fires burning food and even cats stuck up a tree this sounds like a fun job but they have to work 3 hours a day 3 days a week all year in busy towns with millions of people watching you need to be very skilled to have this job  

By Connor

The Fire - Sam Crn

Zzz……Zzz….DING! DING! DING! 
Wake up guys there’s a FIRE!
Quickly get into your bird wings on.
Okay let’s go!

Right, Sam, you hook up the hose. Jim you get the axes.
Sam and Jim went to go and cut the door down.
Whoosh! Went the fire and smoke out the door. They went zooming in and could hear someone yelling for help and there was a baby screaming.
They looked in the living room, bathroom and the kitchen but couldn’t find them. Then they saw stairs but whoosh they caught fire and couldn’t get up the stairs.
Sam had an idea. He went outside and saw people on the balcony so he got the hose while Jim grabbed people in his bird wings. Sam put the fire out.
Yay everyone said.


Sam Crn
Room 11