Monday, August 31, 2015

Nikita - The chocolate store

One day it was my sisters birthday and all she wanted was to go to the chocolate store.So we went all I did was look at the chocolate my sister was also just looking at the chocolate.I am gulten free so I couldnt have any chocolate.The choclate looked so yummy !!!There was Berry,dream,top deck there was EVERY CHOCOLATE EVER INVENTED IN THE WORLD!!!!!!!!My sister was in heaven!!!(so was I).By the end of our trip i had chocolate all around my mouth.After that I had a really sore stomach.  

By Nikita

Ben - Chocolate wonderland



There was once a girl named bananas and she loved chocolate she especially liked the lovely smooth and creamy dark chocolate. One day she was walking in the meadow when she saw a bright light she it was not the sun she crept forward slowly and she was sucked into a wormhole it  teleported here into a chocolate dimension and as she was looking at the chocolate she started to cry of joy. Then she decided to eat all the chocolate and after that there was just white and she started to cry........ Poor bananas.

By Ben

Fynn - Chocolate paradise


Brodie and the chocolate factory

We stood outside the chocolate shop.“Man, look at all that chocolate” I said dreamily “I wish I could just eat all of it!” Mac said. “Came on we'll be late for school” I said as I put on my bag “ok”. After school I was walking home when I saw a $5 note in the grass, I picked it up and run to the chocolate shop. There were so many flavors, there was whittakers Jully tip,peanut slab,Cadbury milk, caramel, dark, light, top deck, peanut butter, crunchy……….
But I picked Cadbury Vegemite

YUM!!!

By Brodie

Maddison - Chocolate

Mum was out, my little brother is out, it's time to snoop. I open all the cupboards, all the draws and nothing yummy. And I remember, mums wardrobe, I run into her room and looking at all that CHOCOLATE made my stomach rumbled. I stick my hand in the little box that the chocolate was in. I hear something outside, I have a look and oh no its my mum! I run into the lounge and she came in looked around shut all the draws and cupboards, then walked off shhh dont tell anyone but I have a chocolate bar ;)  

By Maddison

Sunday, August 30, 2015

Madison - Chocolate Shop

One day as I was walking home after school I saw a new shop it was a chocolate shop. I went in the shop when I got in the I was amazed. I was looking at all of the chocolate then I chose the chocolate I wanted then I buy my chocolate. On the way home I was eating my then it start to get all soft but it was good. When I got home my mum got mad cause I was eating chocolate before tea. She didn't like the new shop where I got the chocolate she called it useless.

By Madison Curtis.  

Alyssa C- the lorikeet and crocodile

Looking at all the chocolate made lorikeet sick, it was a sunny morning and lorikeet was perched on a trolley at the supermarket. He had flown in while now one was looking to see if he could find anything to eat since Currumbin wildlife was closed because they were trying to catch a crocodile that was on the loose. When he realised that there was nothing for him to eat he flew back to Currumbin wildlife to see if they might still be doing the lorikeet feeding. He perched on a branch that felt rather scaly he looked down... Lorikeet had found the crocodile. 

By Alyssa C

Anna - Chocolate Factory!


She stood staring dumbfounded looking at all the chocolate, She is trying to decide what chocolate bar to buy. She scans through all the chocolate, fudge mellow delights, toffee blow ups, caramel pops and much more. She asks for a fudge mellow delight. She walks half the way to her house but the chocolate is too tempting. She nibbles on the corner and wraps it back up, but then she unwraps the chocolate again and takes a BIG bite out of the side. That seemed to satisfy her so she ran all the way back home.
By Anna

Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Riley - The road trip

The road trip

I was going on a road trip with my family. I was so bored we had been going for five hours, I could not believe it. Then suddenly the car stopped, we all get out of the car to see what happened and we only had three tyers. Dad stayed behind to call a towtruck the rest of us went to get something to eat, It took us for ages to find something but we did find something and went back to the car we saw that our car now only had two wheels and dad was not there……...

By Riley

Ben - The invisible wall


There was once a guy named Jeff and he loved driving fancy car like a Lamborghini or Mclaren p1 in this world that they lived in a world of magic there so many stuff of magic from magic wands to broom sticks there is so much magic. Jeff was riding  round on his Lamborghini and he was riding down a lane and he crashed into a invisible wall and Jeff just wasted his 1M dollar car he said to God "curse magic".                     



Lol...

By Ben

Adam - Worst day ever


Some one crossing the road nearly got run over, but then the car stopped suddenly, and another car banged into it, then fuel stared leaking out of the car, then the car went on fire. Then the car blew up and the power lines fell down on a house, a plane crash into the house and blow up. A diesel tank when past and blow up! The petrol station blow up. After all this happened I went on a rocket ship to space. Planet earth blows up.
By Adam

Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Tylar - Stampede

One day, we were going to the zoo, but first we decided to go to the dairy for a newspaper and treats.
 I go into the dairy and ask for a newspaper and some lolly bags for me my sister and my brother. I take the treats... and the newspaper and took into the car.
  I gave my sister and my brother their lollys and gave my mum the newspaper. But she just chucked it on the ground. So i decided to have a little read... Uh oh, there has been a break out of animals at the zoo. Then suddenly the car stops...
By Tylar


Monday, August 24, 2015

Dom - The Car

Once upon a time there was a car it was so slow, but the car stopped as fast as it could then it hit a guy he died I think. But the car kept going the police shot the wheels but it kept going. Its invisible so they tried to blow it up but they cant because its invisible thats how dumb they are so Super Man came and picked It up and threw it to china then there was no more invisible cars. But now there is an invisible man now every body is going to die......   

By Dom                                                                        

Kaitlyn - Stuck in a nightmare.

Lacy leaned on the dirty window of the van, her mane of dark hair covering her face. She sighed, five hours to wait here, five hours to put up with the screams and cries of her siblings. The old van started up, and traveled down the gravel path and out onto the jagged road. Before long, sweat started to gather on Lacy's forehead, and with the air conditioner broken and the windows sealed shut, she knew there was nothing to do. Suddenly Lacy was thrown forward, the van shuddered violently. Lacy screamed, she was stuck in the middle of nowhere.

By Kaitlyn

Sunday, August 23, 2015

Nikita - The horrible camping trip

One day my parents suprised me with a holiday well actually a camping trip.My parents thought it would be a nice change to go but duh theres no wifi and I can not live without wifi.Anyway I ended  up having to go and my mum said that I will get a new phone when we get back so thats what made me go.On our way there the car made funny noises and then we were just about there “CRASH,BANG,BOOM”and the car suddenly stopped.The worst part was there was no reception so we couldnt call someone to help us.In the end we just walked to the place and called a tow truck and he said “the car is fine,its working perfectly all it needed was a break and thats all”.

By Nikita

Madison - The car

One day I was walking home from school when I got to the crossing the car stopped suddenly and I cross as fast as I could. Then I heard the cars start to go again and I keep walking on. Then when I got home I saw a car race by my house and I told my mum and she said it came past all the time. Then the next day I went to school then I saw the same car and it did not stop. So when I got home after school I told mum and she saw it to.

By Madison 

Alyssa C - the legend of the rusty car

"The car stopped suddenly as it submerged into the cold clear sea where it has rested for centuries... Unharmed and untouched. 
(100 fish years later) the ship wreck lays at the bottom of the calm ocean in O'Kiwi bay, where sharks glide around the vintage car, and the sea urchins suck on to the old rustic metal. Know body knows how it got there but legend has it that two sea serpents pushed it to the depths where it stills sits peacefully now." All the little fish in the seaweed bay school looked up at their teacher reading the nonfiction book their eyes wide with amazement.

By Alyssa C

Maddison - PROM

The street was dark. Walking down a dark street in your wet stained prom dress isnt the best feeling. Look you're probably wondering what happened i'll tell you. This night was meant to be magic until my date decided to dance with another girl. I saw him it was ok and then HE KISSED HER. I ran over to him and slapped him across the face and he pushed me into the the punch bowl. Now i'm walking down the street cold wet and smelling like fruit. I saw a car in the distant. The car stopped suddenly in front of me it was my best friend looks like prom didn't go to good for her either.    

By Maddison

Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Caitlin - The Key

The pathway Emma took was nothing more than dirt littered with random rocks..
The air was warm, the beams of sunlight glowing on her skin.
The wild flowers were a riot of colour on the fading green.
Beech trees overlooked a pale lazy river, Emma carried on her adventure.
She sat down on the cold lush grass underneath a large Beech tree.
After reading her favourite book she put it down and went for a walk.
She bent down and found a small key that glistened in the lush green grass, She wondered what it was for, Excited, she ran home and told her brilliant news.....

By Caitlin.

Jordan - The key

There were 2 farm boys playing i a field they both were wrestling each other on the ground. Then one of them fell on something hard so brother got of him and he got up and looked at the ground and he found a gold key. His mom could them in for dinner and he picked up the key and put it in his pocket. After he had his dinner and tried it out on a big old case that he a found a few years back. he put the key in the key whole and twisted.  
By Jordan the key

Riley - The lost key

The lost key

I was walking in the long grass and I found a gold key. I looked to the abandoned house that was always locked, was this the key? A few weeks ago my friend and I decided to have a look around the outside of the house. It was spooky. It had spider webs and cracked pieces of wood,  we ended up running away. Anyway I picked up the key and went towards the house. When I got to the house put the key in the lock and ……... It was the wrong key!

By Riley

Ashley - The Nutcracker

                   
One evening, a brother and sister where walking home together with their friends, their names are John and Mary.  So up the railway reserve they went,  but their friends didn’t go the same way they turned any more.  Out of nowhere they’re somewhere that no-one dares to go down the street of the Nutcracker.  So off they went not know where they were, BOOM “fe fi fo fum, I smell the but of a ahhhhh CHUUUUUU!” “AHHHHHH its the Nutcracker run!”
Jon and Mary run for their lives John drops the key to save their lives but suddenly…..

by Ashley

Tylar - The key

There once was a little boy called Jeff. One day Jeff decided to go on a bushwalk, so he decided to park his car near the entrance of the path.
  Jeff locked his car and shoved his keys in his front pocket of his bag. But he didn’t notice that he forgot to close the zip.
  He started walking up the hill, and finally after two hours he made it to the top. Then he decided to have fun and roll down the hill. When he got back he stood up and went to his car but... he realised his key is gone.

By Tylar

Brodie - a different world...

“I’m not DUMB!” I yelled as I punched Joe  in the gut. “MR CLIFF, PRINCIPAL OFFICE NOW!!!” Miss Jones  said. I ran out the door and thoo the woods, I stopped to catch my breath.I started to walk towards my house. Why I was walking I came across  key in the grass with my initial on it I connected up VOOM

 I woke up in a different world, a world entirely  made of dreams. there was a hot milk stream with cookies in it, and Mr Cuddles  my old pet dog. VOOM I had doped the key and was back on earth.

By Brodie

Tuesday, August 18, 2015

Sam - New Home

I never liked our new house, I thought that I could see shadows of people .  I would tell Mum but she would just say that it’s all in my head, Was I really seeing ghosts?  One night I had my friend Jake over, my mum had to work that night so we just stayed at home playing PS3 and watching TV. I had to take the dog outside to go do business.  While we were outside I stood on something cold, at first I thought it was dog poo but then I saw it was a key... I was like what ??!

By Sam

Anna - The Little Wooden Door!

I slushed through the frozen grass shivering as the ground froze my feet with every step, but I had seen something unusual and wasn’t going to stop. It was a little door hidden in the bush! I slowly turned the silver door knob, but it was locked. I looked through the key hole and saw that the key that would unlock the door was long with an H shape on the end. I rushed back through the bush but as I was running I tripped over, I looked to see what had made me fall. I gasped it was a long key with an H shape on the end! 


                                                     By Anna Sawyer

Erana - Elena

Once upon a time long long ago well more like 2 years ago there was a 13 year old girl named Elena.
Elena's eyes were as blue as the ocean, her beautiful blond hair that was wavy like the sea and had as much freckles as all the twinkling stars combined.
One day Elena was galloping down a steep narrow street on a frosty winters morning.
The sun appeared and something shone brightly in elena's eyes, she paused and tried to look where it was coming from.
She searched around until something pinged on her shoe suddenly Elena stopped and picked up a old rusty MAGICAL!? key…
to be continued...

By Erana 

Blake - the key

“Jeff what’s this?” asked his mother, as she pulled out a lot of grey fluff  out of his dirty jeans.  Jeff didn’t answer.  “Come on Jeff” she said as she put the grey fluff under his nose.  Jeff didn’t want to tell, but his mum was demanding an explanation.
“Dust” he said.  His mum shook it off her hand and wiped it on a towel.  Jeff closed his eyes and tried to remember everything,  and said “ I came across an old cellar yesterday, but the door didn’t budge as it was locked”.  “Suddenly I noticed a silver key in the grass.  I picked it up and tried the door”.   To be continued.


By Blake

Brooklyn - the sports shed

One day i was walking in the park ​and i came across a key. I picked it up and there was was a shed.
i walked over to the shed i could see sport gear inside. i took the key out of my pocket and i went  to put the key in the hole when my sister yelled out to me and said what are you doing. she came over and i said i found this key i think it is for this shed so i put the key in and i twisted the key and opened the doors and went inside and started playing. 

By Brooklyn

Chavawn - WHERE IS THE KEY?


Running through the long overgrown garden at the back of grandma’s house was tiring. I was craving a long tall glass of lemonade. But I couldn’t stop. Not with the trolls house only a little while away from here. I didn’t want him to find out I had taken the key that unlocks his huge chest, that has heaps of jewels in it. I needed the key. Without the jewels granny would become bankrupt and if I didn’t take the key the troll would’ve become so mad all his jewels were gone he might have destroyed the town. I soon got home. But where was the key? Did I drop it?

By Chavawn

Luke - The Key

One day I walked to my house and I could not find the key, I went looking for it wasn’t under the rock, the pot plant or the letter box. I couldn’t find it anywhere, I started retracing my footsteps. This lead me back to school where I might have dropped it. So I got back to school I looked around the school and on the field. Then I saw a bight spark and it was the house key so I ran over to it and ran back home. What relief I found the key.

By Luke

Kaitlyn - Don't share secrets you should keep!

Hannah looked at the ground with dismay, searching for a glimpse of her only hope: a small silver key. Just 5 minutes before she was living the dream, but having pockets with holes sealed her doom. “I found a world of candy!” thought Hannah as she wept, “but now it's gone”. The key unlocked a brass door to rows and rows of sweets, a thing that any girl would wish for. “But sadly,” Hannah sighed, “misfortune came upon her because she shared her secret.” Just minutes ago Hannah calling her friend down, that is when she lost the key.
By Kaitlyn.

Alyssa McN - The long lost key

Dear Reader 
It had been 6 months since I have gone looking for that key and I might have found a clue. I can't wait until I get my talons on it. Um wait I hadn't told you yet, oh you must be thinking I'm a human.( ha ) I've had you going for a long time in my journals but I'm actually a beautiful Scaley Dragon. I have been looking for this key to unlock a door into a portal to go home to my family, but this retched human universe has kept me trapped in here, which feels like a life time.

From Alyssa.M loves dragons

Ruby - The Key

My mums job is so cool she paints antique keys and makes them into jewelry.
I love watching her do them,  she paints them pretty pastel colors then sand papers them so the silver or copper shines through a bit.
She tells me that if I am ever on one of my adventures and I see an old key to bring it back to her and she will make me an extra special necklace out of it.
I have never found a key though so I went out on a hunt.   I walked around for ages and I ended up at an old house.  I walked around it looking for a key.  As I started to lose hope, I saw something glistening in the grass, it’s a key, I picked it up then
the door of the house opened and…

By Ruby

Sarah - The secret door



Ugh I say in boredom “yes Sarah tell my how to answer this question” Mrs Parker says. I say in my mind umm get calculator but lucky the bells goes off I hate that stupid bell I say out loud. I play some sport and get slammed on the grass and found a sliver key with a sticky note on it, saying room 11 desk 24 hay that is Anna desk I better give it to her. Or I should see why her desk needs a key. I seek into the class go to Anna desk see a key hole I unlock the door ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh. 

By Sarah