Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 - Dino Dog by Tamara


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  1. AnonymousMarch 2, 2016 at 12:52 PM

    Awesome story Tamara! Remember to use the word two instead of the number 2. - Danny

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  2. AnonymousMarch 2, 2016 at 12:53 PM

    i love this story tamara i think it really creative to put a dog as the super hero :) maybe next time u could use some more puncuation like fullstops and commers. by charlotte

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  3. AnonymousMarch 2, 2016 at 12:54 PM

    i love this story tamara i think it really creative to put a dog as the super hero :) maybe next time u could use some more puncuation like fullstops and commers. by charlotte

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  4. AnonymousMarch 2, 2016 at 12:57 PM

    Great story Tamara:) remember to go back and read through your work
    mac

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  5. AnonymousMarch 23, 2016 at 2:14 PM

    thanks guys i will next time especially danny;]

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