“Down on Nile street is it?” Queried Mark. “Yeah it’s about a mile away” his father answered. “Why don’t you ride your bike to school?” Suggested Jane his younger sister “yes thats a great idea!” Mark replied gladly. “Now you are leaving primary school does that mean you’re not my friend?” Asked Jane with a frown, “No I will always be your friend forever.” Mark replied followed by a gentle smile. “Yay” Jane celebrated. Never think that we will be friends for life. Nothing could break our bond.
The end.
That was a great story, but you didn't read the homework correctly. From Ruby
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