I always go to the beach with fish and chips every Saturday. I got everything I needed and added a sweet new pair of togs with everything else I needed and stuffed it in my backpack. I got on my bike and pedaled down to the beach.When I saw big signs in a row one was saying “PICK UP THE BEACH” and it was today I was upset because I wanted to go to the beach without it being crowded. There would be a chance for me to lie on the beach, soak up the sun and watch the seagulls fly by. So I biked straight home.
By Lucy
what dose pick up the beach mean????? from scarlett
ReplyDeleteHi Lucy
ReplyDeleteI really like this story, its crerative, but next time work on your punctuation!
Amber T :)
Great work but make your spelling better :-]
ReplyDeleteCaleb Andrews
Great job. But i felt you were a bit repetitive. Using word over and over can get a bit tiering to read. - Sophia
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