Tuesday, March 15, 2016

Week 7 - 5 Sentence Challenge - by Ryan T


The fireworks sound like they are backfiring.
The fireworks have different colours
The fireworks look like a flower
Some of the fireworks look like they are rockets
The fireworks look like they are going up in the sky together

By Ryan

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 16, 2016 at 1:57 PM

    AWESOME job. Maybe next time say what colors there are, and use some more punctuation. Sophia

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  2. AnonymousAugust 4, 2016 at 5:08 PM

    l like your story because you have a big sentences. From yong room 4 vALLEY SCHOOL

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