I dash into the shop and suddenly hear little kids laughing at wacky rows of sweets all around the shop. On a big white table are two large walking, talking chocolate chips. Both are wearing uniform. One is shooting a mini rifle and the other one is lying on the table acting dead. On the side of the table a sign says REENACTMENT OF THE CHOCO WORLD WAR 1! then a man with rainbow roll stretches it out and makes a sword and slices a metal pole in half then he looks at me and passes me talking chip and tells me to keep it. I’ll name it Chipper!
Great story, I like how you did it about chocolate chips. Next time work on your punctuation.
ReplyDeleteAmber T :)
I really liked it if is really funny and serious ps it is pistachio :-|
ReplyDeletefrom Connor
Great story Matthew! Next time work on capital letters
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