“Dread you ready”i said waiting for one of the guards
“Yes toxin ”said dread
“He should be here soon unless”
“Shhh here he comes”
The first thing the guard did was get ready for a race
If i win me and dread leave alive
But if we lose we will be tutored for a week
We then started i was doing pretty good staying in 1st place and i could see the finish line.then when i least expect it DREAD shot me in the leg allowing the guard to win
But i kept running to try to get to the gate but it was to late
By jake
Aka
toxin
I liked story Jake maybe put captial 'i's in next time :)
ReplyDeleteHi Jake, I like your story and how you said “He should be here soon unless”
ReplyDelete“Shhh here he comes” great use of speech marks