Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Week 6 - Asleep? by Zoe

As I hesitantly made my way towards the back of the bus I was caught unaware and without warning I was stampeded by a bustle of  frantic students.  By the time I found my bearings I realized that I was stuck sitting crammed right up against the window, in the middle of all the confusion.  All my energy had been drained and I felt as if I was paralyzed. Amongst the bustle of the cramped bus ride and shouting no one seemed to mind leaving me alone.  Most of them were so caught up in their mindless chatter that they didn’t even notice me sitting in silence. Not they would have cared anyway.

1 comment:

  1. it was very good i really liked it it had lots of descriptive language

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