Wednesday, August 24, 2016

Week 5 - Black basement by Rawiri


David is going down to the pitch black basement to fetch some torches.
In the basement he finds a light shining at a plastic flamingo. The light moves away from the plastic flamingo, David follows the light and begins yelling at the light,“come back you thief.”
Something pokes David.
He see’s four small people holding the torch.
The small people say,“wow! You're extraordinarily  big.”
The small people ran away with the torch. Next thing David is lost in the basement and dies suddenly from a panic attack.
His family is all happy that he is gone.
Next time in the black basement is David really dead, find out in the next story...

The end

By  Rawiri Ni.

1 comment:

  1. nice story I like the sentence when you said David is going in a pitch black room to fetch some torches. nice by Ajay.

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