“On your marks, get set, GO!!” As soon as I heard the clackers go ‘CLAP’ I sprinted right down the race track. I had no bad thoughts about this race, I was feeling confident until my worst enemy, Harper raced past me. I thought of what she did to me when I was younger. She was going down. I dashed past her and watched the smirk fall of her snobby face. I ran as I had never ran before. Everyone was cheering for me, I could see the finish line then...
By Amber T
I really like your use of descriptive language in this story :)
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