Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Week 6 - The story by Brandon

As I get to the starting line i'm nervous and I look around, everyone is quiet and waiting for the starting gun. I take a deep breath as the marshall walks up to shoot the starting gun, the marshall stands puts his arm up looks at us shouts ready set go!!!!! BANG. we all start running like there's no tomorrow people start screaming as we are  boosting pass I pass the finish line, I fall over as everyone is going wild. I rush to my feet everyone is still going insane about that win

I walk off the field I can't wait to go to the olympics.   

2 comments:

  1. Hi Tyler I really like your story I think you have very good words and I love the names professor nose hair it's a little funny and imaginative.
    FROM SAFFRON😎

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  2. I like how you name most things like the Marshall walks up to shoot the gun. Dylan:)

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