As I walk into the office building I am politely greeted by the doorman who shows me to the main office where I will be getting interviewed for a job I have applied for. Beauty and makeup is what I am applying for. When I enter the room I see a stiff looking lady sitting wide eyed in a black leather chair behind a timber desk. I sit down on the stool in front of the desk and the interview begins. When I leave the building I am bursting with happiness because I got my first job in the makeup department! And I thought “well what a start”....
By Charlotte
Dear Charlotte I really liked your story next time work on your punctuation
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From Lucy :)
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI love all of the describing words that you have used:stiff, leather. I like how you say what you are applying for.
From Anna. Your buddy:)