But mum it’s sunday it’s my resting day. Well tough you have to work at the bakery today because chloe is sick.but but ugh fine. Mia are you getting changed or what, i'm getting changed i’m getting changed. We need to go in 10min or if you're not ready you won’t get your payday ok.
Ok breakfast is ready. I’m done oh mum can i drive pleaseeee. Well ok
When we arrived we got straight into it ok mia you work on the pies and sandwiches. Ok i’m done now what do I do, nothing said mum and well i thought what a waste of time.
I loved the structure of your story. Next time check for punctuation mistakes. Also the sentence was and i thought "well what a start".-Sophia
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