Wednesday, August 10, 2016

Week 3 - The day before the race by Brandon

It was the day before the race. I am training for my breathing then a tall man with tattoos came over. So how u feeling about the race. He said in a calm dark voice. Not bad i just need to work on my breathing i say.

I leave and walk out the track I see a few people doing laps around the track. I walk onto the field, and I start to jog and slowly start to speed up and run past a few people, I keep on running, then i hear a snap and I hit the ground with a thump I look at my leg and see some of my bone.      

By Brandon

1 comment:

  1. I really like your ideas in your story especially the sentience, then i hear a snap and I hit the ground with a thump I look at my leg and see some of my bone.

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