Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Week 3 - The dog race by Ryan B

I was almost there, I could see the finish line, then I tripped. My dog saw a squirrel, and had run off after it. It had crossed in front of me then run back, getting me tangled in its lead. As I feel I noticed something horrible - I had gone from being first to last! All of my opponents flew past me, leaving me to eat their dust! I had lost! All because of a squirrel! I even lost my dog because it ran after that squirrel! I guess I’ll have to wait until next year…

By Ryan B

1 comment:

  1. I liked your story, I could not see anything wrong with it.
    mac

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