I ran around the final bend. I passed one then two then three people. All of a sudden I was in first place. I could see the finish line then, pitch black. I had passed out only metres away from the finish line. I awoke startled to see I was in a moving vehicle speeding past the multiple cars. I see paramedics hovering above me blabbering medical mumble jumble to each other. I attempt to twitch my finger… Nothing. I try again, this time I bend my pinky then the rest of my fingers onto my hand, arm, other arm, legs and finally I sit up. After two days of care I was back at school.
I liked how you used descriptive words in your story ~Michaela
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