One day I woke up I looked outside and saw a big race track for the first race Olympics. I entered in as a stock car racer and was competing in the final race.
I got ready and headed down to the track. When I got there they gave me a yellow car with black stripes so I hopped in and got ready. Everyone was starting to get into there cars. The loudspeaker started, 3 2 1 GO! I quickly hit the pedal I got passed three people right at the start and I was at the front. Seconds later the guy in second hit me off the track my tire popped but I was determined to get back on the track. I got out of the mud and was in third I quickly can't up I saw the finish line then I won and the crowd was cheering.
By Sam Cur
Check through your work more carefully next time. Also not all sentences made sense take more time and consideration next time. Other than great ideas. Ruby
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