All ready for the game I strode onto the turf with pride as I wore my nelson hockey reps uniform. The whistles went on off I ran, up the turf with my stick on the ground and my mouth guard in my mouth. Then finally I got the ball did a flick over the oppositions stick and then grabbed the ball back. I dribbled the ball and took a big hit and after that all I could here was the crowd screaming. In the end this was the goal the won us the game I thought to myself would we have won the match without that goal?
By Scarlett
Good story Scarlett. Where did you play? Cause I don't remember you scoring a goal in the reps. What is a flick?
ReplyDeleteHi Scarlett,
ReplyDeleteI like your first sentence because it tells me exactly where you were and it hooks me in. I also like the word strode.
From Esther your buddy