It was the last two kilometers of Le tour de France 2016, I was in the perfect position for the sprint, my team were making sure of that. I had about four rivals and they were all beside me waiting for me to make a move. One by one they started sprinting for the line I waited until seven hundred and fifty meters to go and then sprinted for the line. I was gaining fast I could see the finish line, then my hand slipped of my handlebars and my bike slid over onto the ground, but me and my bike kept sliding toward the line and then over it. I had won!
By Danny
Hi that was an awesome story. I thought the start was good but the ending was really short like how you said I had won It didn't flow.
ReplyDeletefrom Amber N
Hi Danny
ReplyDeleteGreat story I love the ending very cool. Great punctuation and it has great vivid verbs. No wishes, Danny but great story
From Keoni
Hi Danny
ReplyDeleteGreat story I love the ending very cool. Great punctuation and it has great vivid verbs. No wishes, Danny but great story
From Keoni