Sarah ran faster and faster feeling good as she pasted people towards the front of the race. Soon Sarah was in first place running hard with no signs of giving up. The worst thing in a race is tripping up in front of EVERYBODY, but that is exactly what happened to Sarah. She flew through the air and landed with a big thud. All the other participants raced past Sarah like nothing was there, but a girl stopped, helped Sarah up and walked her to the finish line. Everyone cheered for Sarah and the girl, and they each got a prize. :)
I liked the bit were you said 'they ran past her like no one was there'
ReplyDeleteand put some commas in there
great story though
Sam Ctr