My cheeks flushed red as the crowd cheered for me. I hopped out of the pool and accepted my medal. A ginormous grin spread across my face as the crowd went crazy. This was the day when our small town got out first medal…
“On your marks, get set, GO!!” I dived into the water and started doing freestyle. In the corner of my eye I could see people speeding ahead of me! It was time for me to pick up my speed. I found some strength and swam to the end. Everyone was screaming and I realised I had won!! That was the day we won our first medal.
I like your story amber next time just check through your story for spelling mistakes
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