Wednesday, August 31, 2016

Week 6 - l.o.s.s. by Jake

As dread ran towards the village everyone started cheering because of his arrival
But it turned dead silent very quickly, something was able to poison him
Every one ran to help him but it was to late the poison had already killed him and destroyed his armor and his last word was “loss” and there was only one to blame toxin a lord that uses poison to kill his target every one started rioting together against toxin but he already fled. Everyone was confused a terrified not because of toxin but because of dreads last word “loss
By jake
Aka
Dread
P.s why did i kill myself?

3 comments:

  1. Nice story Jake,next time reread it so it doesn't sound like this 'everyone was confused a terrified' Harriett :)

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  2. Good story Jake next time you could read it out loud because you said rioting instead of rotting well that's what it looks like it should be well good story anyway 😀
    By Erin 😀

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  3. Hi Jake. I like how you said (But it turned dead silent very quickly) something was able to poison him. -Noah

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