The green gas started to rise, it moved across the room like a dancer performing their routine. People around me were falling dropping like flies. A sudden weight began to pull me down; I tried with all my might to fight it. It felt like I was swimming against the tide, even though it was likely I would be washed away to sea. I felt my legs fall from underneath me causing me to crash to the floor. A figure walked towards me, I tried to focus on the figure standing before me but failed and let the darkness take over.
By Ruby
This is a very interesting story, a lot like Ruby! Next time work on your punctuation. ~Amber and Michaela :)
ReplyDeleteI love it! Very intense, it suits the dark style.
ReplyDeleteI agree. There is loads of suspense in the end too.
Deletevery neat work, who was the person who was the figure was it a person who let some choking gas out who knows good cliff hanger as well. :-D
ReplyDeleteI love it! Very intense, it suits the dark style. :-)
ReplyDeleteWow Ruby, I really enjoyed reading your 100wc. I loved how you used all the words!
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