This weekend there was news all around saying that the famous dancer Lily Green had announced she was going on a holiday to California. Everyone was looking around for her. The other day we got a call from a lady saying when she was driving to get gas she spotted Lily Green swimming on the beach in Nelson! She thought at first it was likely to be her but as she got closer she knew it was certain. Lily Green is saying it wasn’t her but we have photos to prove it. Caught red handed Lily.
By Amber T
I love it Amber. I like how it flows really good . I think you could work on using more vocabulary. from Amber N
ReplyDeleteGreat work Amber put put some adjectives in next time
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by jack