Wake up guys there’s a FIRE!
Quickly get into your bird wings on.
Okay let’s go!
Right, Sam, you hook up the hose. Jim you get the axes.
Sam and Jim went to go and cut the door down.
Whoosh! Went the fire and smoke out the door. They went
zooming in and could hear someone yelling for help and there was a baby
screaming.
They looked in the living room, bathroom and the kitchen but
couldn’t find them. Then they saw stairs but whoosh they caught fire and
couldn’t get up the stairs.
Sam had an idea. He went outside and saw people on the
balcony so he got the hose while Jim grabbed people in his bird wings. Sam put
the fire out.
Yay everyone said.
Sam Crn
Room 11
Awesome story Sam. You & Jim sound like real hero's 😊
ReplyDeletewoosh good work
ReplyDeletegood work relly liked it keep it up :Brandon
ReplyDeletegood work relly liked it keep it up :Brandon
ReplyDeletegood work Sam I really like the sound effects so good job. from Connor
ReplyDeleteGood job I think the you could just make it more descriptive.
ReplyDelete- From Scarlett
good job sam it is a cool but you could work on is bing a bit more descriptive to the story.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you used in your story the Zzz and the ding in your story.
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