Swooping soaring through the sky trying to save someone from a fire on their backs are
wings with hoses an axes in their hands with rock hard helmets on their heads this is a job of a complicated fireman they fly around waiting for a status update they tackle things like fires house fires to forest fires burning food and even cats stuck up a tree this sounds like a fun job but they have to work 3 hours a day 3 days a week all year in busy towns with millions of people watching you need to be very skilled to have this job
By Connor
very awesome and descriptive it was so good i read it twice from Matt
ReplyDeletelove your story conner it is amazing. rawiri ni mitchell
ReplyDeletelove your story conner it is amazing. rawiri ni mitchell
ReplyDeletevery awesome, descriptive and full of action i thought it was so good i read it twice. From Matt
ReplyDeletegood work connor i really like it it sounds like a pritty rough job.connor
ReplyDeleteLove your story conner it is amazing but what I think you should improve is putting commers and full stops. Rawiri Ni Mitchell
ReplyDeleteThat was a very good story very descriptive. But next time use punctuation. From Ruby and Michaela.
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