Monday, February 29, 2016

Week 5, Term 1 Super Allison by Amber

Once upon a time in a country far far away there was a girl called Allison. She had the power to fly and is bullet proff . One day there was massive shotting going on on the over the over side of world. So Allison flys across to the other side of the world. She goes into the shotting saving 10 people but than Allison gets thowen into a wall.By wonder man . Than Allison  flys up and kicks im in the face. Wonder man stops the shotting and everyone is safe again. Thanks to Allison  who now gets called Super Allison.

By Amber

3 comments:

  1. I love the way alison is bullet proof so she would not get shot

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  2. great work but you need to work on spelling and punctuation.

    Caleb Andrews

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  3. Hi Amber, good story. Next time work on your spelling~ Amber T :)

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