BOOM !
It was a bright sunny afternoon when i sore smoke rising up from a tall yellow building in the centre of the small town . I yelled FIRE FIRE as loud as i could people came racing out. Than i sore the fireman . They were wearing a long sleeve blue top and long blue pants . They had bright yellow wings . Two of the firemen were putting the fire out while one of them was rescuing a woman and a baby from the top level which had a metal and wood railing around it . Meanwhile two of the fireman are just staying back talking than the place went BOOM .
By Amber N
Great job Amber maybe next time and in some commers
ReplyDeleteCaleb A
Very nice what a great story
ReplyDeleteSam carter rm 11
Hi Amber N. My name is Wonder. My teacher is called Ms Brennock. I liked how you used adjectives in the start so I can picture the setting in my head.It reminds me of when I watched Peppa Pig.Were you ok? Visit my class blog at:
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