I coughed with rushing river water streaming down my throat, only thing that could save me now, was hope. Hope, that my hand would hold onto the tree branch. Pain crawled up my arm like a spider, gasping for air, more water surged into my mouth. My hand went numb, and let go of the rock. I spat with water hitting me in all directions as I drifted down the river. I spotted a waterfall ahead, I wail help although it’s pointless. Struggling for air, I fall. Then all of a sudden, I’m floating, a warm embrace holds me. I open my eyes. It was Annora Blackwood. My superhero.
By Abby
Great story Abby It really frithend me when you let go of the rock
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From molly123
Hi Abby. I LOVED your story. It was amazing. Altho you forgot "the" in your sentence stating "I coughed with rushing river water streaming down my throat, THE only thing that could save me now, was hope." From Sophia
ReplyDeleteHi Abby. I LOVED your story. It was amazing. Altho you forgot "the" in your sentence stating "I coughed with rushing river water streaming down my throat, THE only thing that could save me now, was hope." From Sophia
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