I see fire burning down the a house until its ash. Theirs crowds surrounding it while the flying firefighters try to extinguish the red hot flames. There is a lady panicking trying to protect her baby. People are starting to panic while they watch in fear. Smoke rises to the air intoxicating the air Trains are coming past blocking peoples sight while the red hot flames grow bigger. Buildings are close watching the house get burnt ash. The firefighters have backpacks that have wings on the back of them, they can fly and help the lady with the baby. I am the Sky watching down below .
By Caleb
Very nice Caleb maybe next time read through it at the end to make sure some of it makes sense but very nice though
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Good job you had some brilliant ideas but you could use some more punctuation and should check your spelling. From Amber.N & Sophia.
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