The impact had sent me flying even though I was buckled in. I could hear my baby sister crying in her car seat, I didn’t know if she would die or not. Looking out my window I could see the blue water coming closer as if threatening me. I took a deep breath as we collided with the water. I struggled to breathe, the world around me was starting to fade, I felt arms wrap around me then everything went black. Her name was Evie Newland; she saved me that day; if it wasn't for her I might not be here. She is my real life superhero.
By Ruby
To Ruby,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story. You used great describing words.
From Molly123
I love the way that you described things and the way you also but its scary
ReplyDeleteLucy :)
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! Great description I love how you describe the water etc. ~Amber T :)
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