Monday, February 22, 2016

The Frog - Connor

One day there was a little green frog who liked going swimming. One time he went swimming he bumped into a big black spider “Hi” said the spider. The frog just stood there screaming and then the frog ran away. The next day he went for a walk then he ran into his friend the dancer. So they stopped and chatted for a while frog asked if he made it into the dancing finals. The dancer said “I am most likely going to make it in.” Just then a big gas cloud came floating along “yuck” said the frog.


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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2016 at 12:53 PM

    good storyline but the ending was a little bit sudden Kynan

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  2. AnonymousMarch 3, 2016 at 10:38 AM

    Hi Connor. I liked your story. It reminds me of when I was watching Muppets. Try to use better words than "then" like .
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