Wednesday, February 24, 2016

The dancer - Jasmine

Once there lived a girl who was very good at swimming but she did'nt like it. She liked dancing and wonted to be a ballerina but her mum and dad would'nt allow it.
Everytime she asked they would say no. Two years later and she still doing swimming. One day she went to do her training for swimming  but the pool was closed most likley because of a toxic green gas. She walked bake home. When she got home her parent had an Email. That said the poo lwill be closed forever. So she got to do dacning in the end 

By Jasmine

2 comments:

  1. JASMINE spell check next time. Also it was nice a descriptive.
    From - Scarlett

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  2. Hi Jasmine. I liked your story a lot. This reminds me of when we were dancing in our previous school. Please check for spelling mistakes.

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