James was watching the olympics on TV, we were even with australia with 100m to go, we couldn’t lose at the sport that we were world champions for. “JAMES!” yelled Mum as he watched the boats glide through the water with tremendous speed. “Go down to the shop and get me some pasta and eggs,” James groaned as he practically fell off the couch, then he grabbed his scooter and sped down the sidewalk to the shop.
He opened the door to his house and walked in. “DID YOU GET THE MINCE?” He heard her yell from the kitchen. “No” he replied “YOU’RE GROUNDED!” “But how could I know?”
By Danny
The story is cool, the boats glided through the water Glided is a good word I wish you would use a little more vivids.
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