“H-Hey!”
I hear a gruff voice shout at me
“Ngghh…”
I moan feeling a sharp pain in my forehead. My body felt stiff and my heartbeat was rapid, but I was grabbed and shaken by the man who was shouting at me. It was difficult to see my surroundings, my head throbbed so much that it was hard to focus on the figure before me. The man’s grip was strong, but it grew gentle as he saw my eyes slowly open. His face was slim and pale, but his expression was troubled.
“Are you alright, Miss? What are you doing here?”
But how would I know?
By Abby
Hi Abby it's Xanthea I really like your adjectives they are very powerful. And your whole story was descriptive,have you thought about being an author.I think you could use a more descriptive ending.From Xanthea Valley School.
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