Wednesday, April 6, 2016

Week 10 - By Amber T

CRASH!! “Guess I’m awake now”, I complained. I went to see what the noise was. Turns out it was just my sister Hazel getting ready for a bike ride. “Come with me!”, she beamed.
“Oh alright”, I answered.
I really wasn’t in the mood for a bike ride but I’d do anything for my sister. I didn’t know where we were going but Hazel said she had a special spot. After biking for a while, we saw something unusual up ahead. I suddenly saw Hazel slowing down…. But it was too late.

By Amber T

2 comments:

  1. Its amazing next time make it more clearer about what happened at the end did you die or did she crash into you?
    ~Amber and Michaela:)

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  2. I really like your story because you put guess I'm awake now.

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