Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Week 11 - Balloon by Mac

All day I see clouds, balloons and lampposts I sit there peacefully with no sound of a bird cheap bees buzzing around underneath me next thing that happens to me a boy sits on me with his balloon and before I saw on my lap was running around with his balloon and the grass under his feet it must of been the best feeling cuz I can't move I'm just a parkbench .  I wish I was a free boy like him , I would love to run endlessly for my whole life. Next thing I now the balloon poped.

By Mac

2 comments:

  1. next time Mac make sure make that poped be popped i don't think the ballon went and had a poo and maybe next time and a little bit more punctuation

    -Sam Carter

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