It was a nice summers evening birds singing, dogs barking in the distance and the sweet essence of vanilla in the cool breeze. As my kite glided through the sunny sky I noticed it getting a bit cold and damp.
“What is going on” I ask one of the fellow people at the park.
“I don’t really know”. Then suddenly the ground starts trembling all around us. The ground starts turning into what it looks like to be paper. Everyone started freaking out, all the dogs were barking at the strange paper ground. After a while people just started getting used to it, it was a usall thing for us.
By Kynan
Cool story Kynan. Next time you could use 'started' as opposed to 'start' in the sentence 'Then suddenly the ground starts trembling all around us' to make it 'Then suddenly the ground started trembling all around us.'
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it was a good i liked it
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