It was a windy day in Windville, James really wanted to try out his new kite and now was his opportunity. He went into the garage and pulled it out of the cupboard.
“Can you please take me to the park so that I can try out my new kite?” Asked James.
“Sure!” agreed Dad
They were walking to the park and James was very excited.
“It’ll fly like a bird!” Exclaimed James.
“I can't wait” he said.
The kite flew like the wind, James loved every minute of it.
Very nice I didn't find any errors in this story. Great
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everything is awesome but work on your title By Kynan
ReplyDeleteDear Danny,
ReplyDeleteHi I really enjoyed your story good effort.Here is a link to my 100 w/c
https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/570e7b6cd3b57d03003519b6
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