As I was just flying my kite.A huge gust of wind hit my face and my kite.My kite flew away I bursted into tears.Then as time flew by it was my birthday I got a book from my grandma i hated books absolutely hated then even she knew that so I just said thank you and opened another present I got a huge a new kite it was rainbow I was so excited so I ran into my room with all my presents opened the book on page 4 then after 3 seconds I went into the book went into the book seriously it was very winded so then I held up my kite and it flew like the wind I ran with it and I was free!!!
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