“Yay, look look I’m doing it, I’m flying my kite, oh, oh yeah thats right, she moved.” Mia stammered out loud. Mia felt a small slaty transparent tear slowly trickle down her warm rosy cheeks. Mia dropped her kite and ran to her house. She stormed into her room and slammed her head into feather pillow. Her mother walked in and asked what was wrong? “ I-I miss Amelia, I mean sh-she taught me how to do everything she’s my big sister and now she live in NYC” Mia explained. “Well guess what? I was going to wait to tell you this but she’s coming home tomorrow!” Mia’s mother proclaimed. The next day Amelia came home and the sisters were reunited.
THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely story you have lots of punctuation well done
ReplyDeletefrom Olivia and Scarlett
You have 121 words it is over the limit By The Word Police
ReplyDeleteBy Kynan
Good Story Sophia but the font make it hard to read.
ReplyDelete-Danny
Dear Mia, Amelia and Sophia,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story great effort. You used great punctuation and speech.Here's my story
https://edu.nightzookeeper.com/stories/570e7b6cd3b57d03003519b6
from Molly123