Midnight outside plague labs
“COME ON WE HAVEN'T GOT TIME WE MUST REVIVE VEZON!”shouted dr impatiently waiting
“Sir i think we found it” said one of his henchmen
“Let me see”said dr taking the book out of his hand. it was the wrong enchanted book. characters and lamp post came out of it.
“YOU IDIOT THIS IS THE WRONG BOOK!” Shouted dr “no mater i can still fix it” he clicked his claws’ a dark mist started covering the page changing it into his spellbook
“There now let me see”said dr reading the content
“hmm hmm...NO!”shouted dr furiously “IN ORDER TO REVIVE HIM I NEED THE SPEAR OF FUSION OH FORGET IT!”said dr heading back to the lab
jake/dr inferno
love it so funny u missed some punctuation thou is it that book dr infurno can he fix it yes he can
ReplyDeleteI like your ideas in your story Jake.Next time you might want to think about putting the right punctuation in the right place.
ReplyDeleteFrom Charlotte
jake i like how you use speech marks and other punctuation your ending punctuation.
ReplyDeletemac
There was a lot of speeech but next time have a bit more punctuation. From Matt
ReplyDeleteJake you did good with you story but you forgot capitl letters which was two (I).-Rawiri
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