One day i had a surfing competition between me and the world champs.
It was my turn to surf i was nervous but i gave it a go.
I did a front flip everybody cheered and clapped.Then there was a big wave ahead so i got down and started to paddle then stood up.
I bet the wave and came out the other side.
Everybody cheered so loud that my ears rang like a bell.
It was at the end of the competition and a speaka talk.
And i heard my name to come up and get my medal.
By Ava
Hi Scarlett it is Jasmine here I really liked your story but I am a bit confused how the story relates to the picture. Also you need to make sure you have CAPS on when you do your I's.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Ava,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described the cheering.
Next time work on your capital letters
~Amber T :)