As I approach the top step leading to the forest I notice a firefly, golden and buzzing around my head. As I brush it away I notice more and more swarming around me, thousands all at once. I move forward and as I do they form a path for me to follow that leads straight to a little white house just west of the village. It’s sitting on the edge of a river bank where hundreds of sparkling blue stones lay, all scattered around the bend of the river. It almost felt like a strange magic had taken over me.
By Charlotte :)
Hi Charlotte
ReplyDeleteI like how described things
From Lucy
Hi Charlotte,
ReplyDeleteI love your story because your use of descriptive language gives a good picture in the readers mind. The part where it says a river bank where hundreds of blue stones lay.
I can't find any bad things about this story. Well done.
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