Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Week 10 - The Speeding Car by Ryan B


It all happened quite suddenly. I was walking down the road when hear a loud ‘Vroooom!’ followed by a gust of air, and then another ‘Vrooooom’. It was a speeding car, and the police were hot in pursuit. I watched them disappear off into the distant, an orange car zooming round a bend closely followed by a police car, glinting like a star under the sun. Then I hear a large ‘Boom!’, and I run around the corner too see what happened, although I had already guessed. I spun round the corner to see the orange car up in flames.

By Ryan B

1 comment:

  1. Your story is well written but you said that the police car following the orange car twice.
    mac

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