Tuesday, July 5, 2016

Week 10 - RWC final by Luke

10:30am, Aviva Stadium, Dublin

My name is Caleb Milner-Skudder.  I am in the All Blacks.  My father, Nehe Milner-Skudder, was in the ABs in 2015 and 2019 RWC.  The final is Wallabies vs All Blacks.  Right now we are just finishing our warm-ups for the final.  20 minutes later we were lining up ready to go onto the pitch.  I am number 14, the winger.  Soon Zach McCaw was leading us onto the pitch.  After we sung our national anthem, We started our haka.  I don’t know if they were intimidated because they did not show it.  After a few minutes we were ready to start.  As soon as we started the Wallabies picked up the ball and then they scored and converted   7-0.  Then we scored and converted.  7-7.  The game carried on like this until the 65th minute.  The score was 42-44 to us.  They suddenly broke our line and scored a try.  49-44. From then on it was like running into a brick wall for us. In the 78th minute Ryan Blackwell kicked a penalty. 49-47.  Then the siren went, they kicked off just before.  Suddenly we broke their line. But we got tackled by their full back. After 2 minutes of run and smash. Ryan Blackwell set himself up for a drop goal.  It hit the post and rebounded somehow we got it back and Ryan tried it again.  It hit the post again, But this time it went over after hitting the post.  49-50, To us. We won it for a record 4th time.

2 comments:

  1. I liked that you based it on rugby because I like rugby. Maybe next time you could use puestins marks and exlamation marks.

    By Jacob

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  2. You pulled the reader in and kept their attention throughout the whole story. Next time try to extend yourself use a vary of compound,simple and complex sentences.
    Zoe

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